I have quite a few things to say so I'll just put them in order :
A the intro, during the explosion, we can clearly see ''make more gift at gif-soup'' or something. It's just weird to see that during an animation.
The intro song could have ended in a fade out instead of being brutally muted.
There's was many punctuation mistake and 1-2 blatant spelling mistakes, careful for those thing.
Some fonts were impossible to read due to certain colors (brown, black...), you could add a white bubble behind them to erase this problem.
I don't mind the super sayan transformation but it's a bit cliché. It's not bad but some people may hate it.
Things felt a bit rushed, people that don't really know each others just becomes allies in a matter of seconds.
You could have used some Sonic sound effects... You know, because it's a sonic animation. For example, at the end, before they fight, you could have used a voice clip of Shadow saying ''let's do this'' , ''this is the ultimate power'' or something like that.
And last of all... Why is it in the game section? It should be on the animation section.
As a game, I give it 0/5.
A an animation, I give it 2/5.
The music is alright but it doesn't loop (it's pretty much a must for a game), the art-style is goofy but the background could use a little bit more details (A wallpaper, a clock, a computer, a window with some nature outside, anything that would fill that grey background!).
There's not much things to dress Phil with. There could be piercing, bracelets, glasses, hats...
Of course, if you want to go more hardcore on this, you could add some animation (eye blink, animation in the background, the bling-bling shirt could sparkle...)
It isn't a bad game but it gets pretty boring after a while.
It's a nice interactive story.
The ambience was good, the music too but for the originality well... It's kinda unoriginal at this point.
''All alone, nothing but myself, nightmares that haunt me, finding back my past to understand what happened even though it doesn't really form a story (we abandoned you in space)''
And it bring to another point : it's short. The problem is, you can't really do a long game with this much story.
The end is a classical ''alea jacta est''. Again, NOTHING new there.
The art-style was nice, it fits the ambience.
Last thing, the game wasn't loud enough. Each time an achievement notification would pop, it would surprise me.
Nothing really smashing about this. It's just a simple drawing game... But ponified.
Don't get me wrong, I love my little pony, but you could literally have more possibilities using paint on window 95 than what you can do in this game.
You could add... I know! Transparent lines that you must draw over and you're rated for the precision of your drawing (if you draw too much out of lines, then rarity could find this ugly)
There could be already drawn picture but you must colours them without going over the black lines or, colouring them with the right colours ; for example, you have a Rainbow Dash drawn on the paper and you must choose the right colours and then, rarity get to say her opinion depending of your score.
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