I don't if it was intended, but the bass is so loud at the start that it's peaking.
Peaking is basically when the computer cannot register the loudness of the thing, so it ''scratches'' the sound, a bit like a distortion. The rest of the song doesn't peak though.
2:39 ; Could use a better transition
1:37 ; Could use a delay with the synth (an echo, just like this one 1:55) [in my opinion]
Just one question, did you use samples for this song? How much, if this isn't asking too much. :3
I used Mixcraft 3, which is nothing but samples. Back when I had money in 2014, I didn't have the foresight to get FL Studio, mostly because I was preoccupied getting a replacement computer. I would much prefer to be able to write my own notes & do cover songs for people to use in parodies 'n such but maybe sometime in the future.
The beginning is good. Could have used a more subtle intro who would have been different from the rest of the song.
There could be more bass. To add a deeper feel to the song.
Some high pitched tones who are a bit crystal looking are too aggressive for the hears due to their high feedback ratio.
I would have :
- Added some piano (with some reverb)
- Some bass (like I've said earlier)
- More variation (different chord), the music was a bit stale, be a little daring!
Play some chord and see if it would suit the music.
- Maybe some cymbals, I think it would suits.
- Adding some wind effect with the bass to add some accent for further transition.
thing is i would like to add more its just im bad at making melodies and decent drum beats, it's something i've been trying to work on but i'm not too focused on that, i actually should have just classified this as a drone because this is practically one, maybe one day i will come back to this and try out those ideas
thanks for the review!
I make music sometimes. Feel free to do whatever you want with any of what I do; it's yours, my friend.
Age 26, Male
Montreal
Joined on 6/27/15
Odyssey 
Falling Skies 
